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    Chase the Charmander trainer. Chase's Avatar
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    My name is chase and my favorite pokemon is charmander. i write alot and want more freinds.

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    Uh... Welcome?

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    Bob says hi.

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    Chase the Charmander trainer. Chase's Avatar
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    That was mean, someone locked my rpg. My brother said its was porbabbly my spelling so he edited it.


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    I locked it.

    1. You posted in the wrong section
    2. It's not up to standard. Look around the board and try again when you've improved it.

    And don't post it again.

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    Up to standard? That's a bit harsh Ninetails, you could have at least asked/warned him before just locking it.
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    Chase the Charmander trainer. Chase's Avatar
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    What is there to change?


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    Just read other Role Plays that are active, read their plot summaries and posts, their forms and how people RP. Also remember that it is not Pokemon only.
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    Chase the Charmander trainer. Chase's Avatar
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    I don't see anything wrong with it. i post this on a couple of pokemon boards and they liked it.


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    Just look at other RP's

    Your plot is scattered and confusing a bit. You pretty much throw people into nothing and expect them to go everywhere without direction. It's very small and simplistic. You also did not give a form, and your form given for your Charmander is severely lacking.

    PD is different than other Pokemon forums.
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    it's the best i can do though. I worked hard on it. Can we just try it out, what harm whould that do? what do you mean differnt?


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    This forum isn't as friendly as Serebii or PE2K
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    Chase the Charmander trainer. Chase's Avatar
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    Well I dont want any trouble all i want to do is rp. thast all


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    I know, which is why I said it was unfair for her to straight up lock it, she could have at least warned you or asked to improve. She left you with virtually nothing to think about.
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    Well ill try to make it better but i really dont think it should be locked right now. i just want to start rping and improve it along the way.


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    You're definitely lord.
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    Too quick.
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    He needs to work on his noob act a lot more.
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    Then we will dye easter eggs and watch stupid horror movies until she pisses her pants and I die.
    Im growing impatient with these malevolent slithering reptiles on this bloody aircraft.
    - Snakes on a Plane (As if spoken by a proper Englishman)

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    I mean, it's too quick for him to rejoin since he left.
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    Welcome, again.
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    Quote Originally Posted by Chase View Post
    it's the best i can do though. I worked hard on it. Can we just try it out, what harm whould that do? what do you mean differnt?
    And that's wonderful that you worked so hard on it. You just need to improve your skills a bit. Try researching Plot, Conflict, Theme, Setting and Character. Read some books and find what's so good about your favorites.
    People admire and respect their superiors, are repulsed and disgusted by their inferiors, and connect to their equals.

    The extreme highs and lows in life get a strong reaction - Yet it the averages in life that most people connect to.

    The class system is nothing more then different groups of people grouping with their fellow equals and feeling the sense of separation from their superiors and inferiors.

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    Try Dash, or me. I'm on a standard quality. Not too great, not too good either..
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