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    I dunno if im really good at drawing but i want some tips and advice kay =)
    just dont be an ass D: its uncalled for

    I drew this randomly in school today not knowing it was on the back of a note to my lover -.-




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    awful.

    here's an honest review:

    the proportions are meant to be similar to the original anime's proportion, but the outcome seems lop-sided and distorted. the shading on the head makes no sense, the neck is much too long, and skitty was an awful choice (unless you made it look original or created without looking at a picture of it).

    2/10


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    I'm going to withhold judgment until I see some other works. Can't really tell much from a relatively limited single picture.
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    here are some more then
    they are pretty recent
    and no i wasnt looking at anything when i drew the skitty -.-
    i was in class if you had read above the picture
    but thank you mr. pants person for the advice. a little harsh but could be worse =)







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    if i had a horse for every time i heard that, i'd have 2 horse Pants's Avatar
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    awful captures, but thats not your artistic fault. just scan them next time.

    anyway,

    about the art...

    the pictures that are obvious poses and direct copies from the fully drawn pokemon, the cards, or the sprite poses have alot of perspective and proportion issues...

    such as the heads of jolteon, espeon, charmander, and skitty.

    the gardeviour's ear is not nearly that huge in the 3rd pic... its just off-putting, and it seems really awkward.

    now for some nice things i saw

    GREAT lopunny! its simple, well proportionate, and it seems natural. (just finish its shading please)

    i liked the odd interpretation of umbreon (my personal favorite pokemon ever), and it seemed very original and well-exeggcuted (lol)

    basicially, your biggest issue is low/no contrast shading, and proportions.

    if you practice on those, you'll be a fine line artist

    PS: might i recreate that umbreon? that would look really cool as a sig


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    of course you may =) and im not quite finished with the shading i just drew them a few days ago. but thank you again ^^

    and unfortunately i dont have the money for a scanner =/
    i would use one or something better if i had anything better
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    It's good Not at the same level as all the really good stuff on deviantART, but practice makes perfect.

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    thank you =D
    ive really only been drawing for a year or so ^^
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    My favourite is probably the first charmander
    Originally made by LM:


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    For a year you are very good.
    Like what Pants said, practice on proportions and shading.
    Try different tones by pressure. ^^
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    Hey, I think it's great. I love your laughing Gardevoir.

    she looks a little maniacal, which is awesome... lol

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    This one's nice too.
    Originally made by LM:


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    I agree

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    Love that one. Although I'm not really sure what it is

    Oh, and the umbreon's nice.
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    Switch the colors on the gastrodons.

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    Quote Originally Posted by dragon_berry View Post

    Love that one. Although I'm not really sure what it is

    Oh, and the umbreon's nice.
    its a tribal charizard
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    well?

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    Shut up, Kirby.
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    No. Someone needs to switch the gastrodons.

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    Don't you have skool or something?
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    Yeah in like 5 minutes.

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    Quote Originally Posted by <3Strawberry<3 View Post
    its a tribal charizard
    Nice! Love the tribal style.
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    thank you very much ^^
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    It's really good.

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    Strawberry I like the Dragonite and the Leafeon.
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