please critique this
i decided that i'm going to give you all first crack at my new flash short.
it has not been uploaded anywhere besides the NG dump, so you will all be the first to see it.
click here to watch it
please leave any helpful criticism you can!
thanks again!
your welcome
It was...short.
"The most beautiful thing we can experience is the mysterious. It is the source of all true art and all science. He to whom this emotion is a stranger, who can no longer pause to wonder and stand rapt in awe, is as good as dead: his eyes are closed." Albert Einstein
yeah, i didn't feel like syncing 2:30 worth of rant from a Jman lets play
your welcome
You're a good animator, but try generating original content
Originally Posted by kyne
i have. this is like my 60th animation solly
your welcome
Well then why show us this one?
it was before i posted it, and i needed to know of any quick changes i could do.
if you wanna see my better stuff, i think the place to look is my demo reel from last year, but it probably doesn't matter anyway.
your welcome
Ok well there's nothing really wrong with it other than you took another guy's voice and put a conservative animation over it.
well, it was more for J, for all of the hours of entertainment, but i knew it wasn't very expansive based on story. the original video was just the game and audio, so i decided to supply a visual. pretty simple really
i wasnt gonna expect way too much out of it anyway
your welcome
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