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    NMG-YLC/Nathan
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    Default CWW Song!

    The chorus is chorus only:

    Is there something wrong?
    What is this war going on?
    I fly from clan to clan!
    Seeing charizard and mew using their flame!
    Its Clan World War One!
    Is the pokemon wifi world done?
    The coolest idea in online!
    CWW1 will have war debts over dimes.
    Join now and see!
    If you dont dont get made from Bedrill clan's stinging bees!

    *course its kinda in the making*

    www.pokemonwifi.tk

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    I <3 Harry Espegirl's Avatar
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    EW. that was terrible... no offence to you, you just don't have songwriting skills, Mr. Perfect.





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    how can I improve it?

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    Well, I admit. It would probably sound better if I heard the music that would go along with it. Plus, before writing a song, I suggest trying out poetry. It will really help. Also, the song it's self is kinda cheesy. (Just my opinion)





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    Quote Originally Posted by Espegirl View Post
    Well, I admit. It would probably sound better if I heard the music that would go along with it. Plus, before writing a song, I suggest trying out poetry. It will really help. Also, the song it's self is kinda cheesy. (Just my opinion)
    thanks for your constructive critisism.

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    Your welcome.





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    it is ploop {ploop means shitey or crappy}
    I had lost my way during my journey
    Only my soul was wandering while I stood still
    But right now Im walking to a distant place
    Thats right ever since I met you on this road
    The travellers witnessed the song the forbidden song
    And i became attatched to it as I heard it alone with you
    If the world I was in my dreams exists somewhere
    Let's go search for it beyond the winds
    Whether it's a freezing dawn
    a dry midday
    a shivering night
    or the ends of the Earth lets go and see it

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    grow up, because I dont see yours! At least I tried! All you are is a member! You dont have anything to control, so I suggest you be quit.

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    Who r u guys talking with? :/
    --A dreamer is one who can only find his way by moonlight, and his punishment is that he sees the dawn before the rest of the world--

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