An Ivy League professor not associated with my campus looked over my paper and sorta ate it up. As much of a proud man as I am I am one to take real critique with humbleness and I will do as the prof. Says and work on what's needed to be worked on. Today I was put down a peg but tomorrow is another day. As the saying goes, fail beter. I shall do just that and keep working hard on a passion of mine.