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    I do things like get in a taxi and say, "The library, and step on it. Lord's Avatar
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    It's in the editing room with my writing collective right now.
    Well, I open my eyes and I see things. I've seen spirits moving through the walls. I've seen a vortex coming through the wall. I've seen amorphous little balls of light bouncing all around in the front yard through the window. I've seen giant bugs on the floor. I was in a hotel room in Amarillo, Texas, and all I remember is standing on the bed and seeing the whole wall in front of me filled with lights that were [makes popping sound] popping like popcorn out of the wall. Then I'll wake up and I go "Wow, I was standing on my bed and staring at this wall."

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    I do things like get in a taxi and say, "The library, and step on it. Lord's Avatar
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    Hey Rayne, is golden gate bridge the notorious suicide jumper bridge?
    Well, I open my eyes and I see things. I've seen spirits moving through the walls. I've seen a vortex coming through the wall. I've seen amorphous little balls of light bouncing all around in the front yard through the window. I've seen giant bugs on the floor. I was in a hotel room in Amarillo, Texas, and all I remember is standing on the bed and seeing the whole wall in front of me filled with lights that were [makes popping sound] popping like popcorn out of the wall. Then I'll wake up and I go "Wow, I was standing on my bed and staring at this wall."

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    I do things like get in a taxi and say, "The library, and step on it. Lord's Avatar
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    Received my first ever literary rejection the night before last, I - I think I'm gonna make it you guys!

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    I should write something.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Kirby View Post
    I enjoy conversations with Solly <3
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    I think solly's criticism is definitely genuine. It's your first novel, don't get a big head!
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    Solly is right. You're going to get a lot of criticism and you're going to have to learn to deal with it. Belittling people for failing to understand your "artistic direction" is definitely not the right way to go about it. If potential readers don't understand the aesthetic that you are aiming for, then that's your fault, not theirs.
    literally UGH at all of you damn it
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    Thanks j

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    Quote Originally Posted by Qoorl View Post
    I should write something.
    Yes. You should.

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    J! Baby!

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    lord its so weird when you post on /lit/ and i can tell its you

    which just happened

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    Quote Originally Posted by God View Post
    lord its so weird when you post on /lit/ and i can tell its you

    which just happened
    I think this time round is a lot more entertaining.

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    Ok, but seriously, did I accidentally murder Justin's child or something?

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    He's a positive guy, doesn't wanna hear negativity and likes to he a rebel so if course he's gonna act out against the dissenters.

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    Of course, the classic internet message board positive anti-rebel! How did I miss it?

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    he feels gay desire towards you so channels it into antagonism. just like with dogar.

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    Of course, the classic internet message board positive homosexually-motivated anti-rebel! How did I miss it?

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    Your years of salvia abuse have dulled your ability to recognize forum archetypes.

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    Quote Originally Posted by God View Post
    he feels gay desire towards you so channels it into antagonism. just like with dogar.
    Sounds pretty damn heavy...

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    absolutely not!!!!!!
    Quote Originally Posted by giftsbestt View Post
    People, let us discuss 4 actions to support your personal wife's continue to Earth less complicated: Vacuum your girlfriend car. Refill her vehicle's gas tank. Buy her flowers... originating from a florist who all conducts business in a very building along with a solid roof top, not on road-side stands as well as at gasoline stations. You might earn things by actually vehicle and getting out of your car or truck. Gas rail station flowers that reek of unleaded tend to be not as purposeful. They along with precisely the same category seeing that gas station sushi.

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    I do things like get in a taxi and say, "The library, and step on it. Lord's Avatar
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    My snippet has once again popped up on /lit/, this time re-posted (not by me) in a compilation thread to showcase the best original /lit/ works. I think I'm going to make it, you guys.

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    P.S. Solly I think you would quite enjoy reading Borges.

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