poems
i made these in english class today:
Pooh
Roses are red
Violets are blue
Don't kiss me now
I have to go pooh
Pencil
I wish my pencil would walk away
So I can go out and play
I wish my paper would fly away
So I can do something else today
Poem
I wrote a poem called pooh
I realy like it I do,I do
Book
Take a look
In a book
They can tell you how to cook
They are not to be ofencive they where just random poems i made up
I had lost my way during my journey
Only my soul was wandering while I stood still
But right now Im walking to a distant place
Thats right ever since I met you on this road
The travellers witnessed the song the forbidden song
And i became attatched to it as I heard it alone with you
If the world I was in my dreams exists somewhere
Let's go search for it beyond the winds
Whether it's a freezing dawn
a dry midday
a shivering night
or the ends of the Earth lets go and see it
Ur u spell pooh poo
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hmm strange poems but good whatsoever.
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I had lost my way during my journey
Only my soul was wandering while I stood still
But right now Im walking to a distant place
Thats right ever since I met you on this road
The travellers witnessed the song the forbidden song
And i became attatched to it as I heard it alone with you
If the world I was in my dreams exists somewhere
Let's go search for it beyond the winds
Whether it's a freezing dawn
a dry midday
a shivering night
or the ends of the Earth lets go and see it
Why do people post this shit? Seriously, why would we want to read this?
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don't listen to him, he's suffering from 'the angst'
or something.
seriously, that was odd and satisfyingly...odd.
thanx
I had lost my way during my journey
Only my soul was wandering while I stood still
But right now Im walking to a distant place
Thats right ever since I met you on this road
The travellers witnessed the song the forbidden song
And i became attatched to it as I heard it alone with you
If the world I was in my dreams exists somewhere
Let's go search for it beyond the winds
Whether it's a freezing dawn
a dry midday
a shivering night
or the ends of the Earth lets go and see it
erm, WOW. They suck. No offense, they just lack anything slightly interesting. Try haikus. Now those are quality poems.
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I had lost my way during my journey
Only my soul was wandering while I stood still
But right now Im walking to a distant place
Thats right ever since I met you on this road
The travellers witnessed the song the forbidden song
And i became attatched to it as I heard it alone with you
If the world I was in my dreams exists somewhere
Let's go search for it beyond the winds
Whether it's a freezing dawn
a dry midday
a shivering night
or the ends of the Earth lets go and see it
What. The. Fuck?Originally Posted by crashgirl897131
hey i was like 5 when i wrote those
I had lost my way during my journey
Only my soul was wandering while I stood still
But right now Im walking to a distant place
Thats right ever since I met you on this road
The travellers witnessed the song the forbidden song
And i became attatched to it as I heard it alone with you
If the world I was in my dreams exists somewhere
Let's go search for it beyond the winds
Whether it's a freezing dawn
a dry midday
a shivering night
or the ends of the Earth lets go and see it
So what? Are you six now? It says right there at the top "I made these in english class today".
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You suck, before posting something like this, show 'em to a teacher to rate what you have written. Use word to see if you wrote everything correctly, if you did that, you can post this on PD.
I wonder who's worse, this crashgirl or that one with the extremely long and annoying name? Is it even possible that they're alts?!
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Maybe, they seem both as stupid..they also could be sisters. But I guess crash is worse, I never saw such noobish poems..if they even deserve the title as "poem".
I would have to agree with you there.
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Like Ed would say now, "This thread is toasted". The poems suck, and it's a waste of space in my opinion. Crush, get better at grammar and poems, or leave PD. We have enough noobs on here, we don't need idiots who think they can post even single of their shit just because they can rhyme two words.
Uh...yeah, crash is worse.
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okay back up that was my little sister i diden't do that
I had lost my way during my journey
Only my soul was wandering while I stood still
But right now Im walking to a distant place
Thats right ever since I met you on this road
The travellers witnessed the song the forbidden song
And i became attatched to it as I heard it alone with you
If the world I was in my dreams exists somewhere
Let's go search for it beyond the winds
Whether it's a freezing dawn
a dry midday
a shivering night
or the ends of the Earth lets go and see it
if you dont like it why are you here?
I had lost my way during my journey
Only my soul was wandering while I stood still
But right now Im walking to a distant place
Thats right ever since I met you on this road
The travellers witnessed the song the forbidden song
And i became attatched to it as I heard it alone with you
If the world I was in my dreams exists somewhere
Let's go search for it beyond the winds
Whether it's a freezing dawn
a dry midday
a shivering night
or the ends of the Earth lets go and see it
hey crashgirl, I don't wanna be offensive of anything but... why is it so short? It's what a six year old would write.
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