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    In the story,Dawn shall go into a contest and battle some trainers and meet another rival. The rival is also Zoe's cousin! The rival though is a rookie she is one tough coordinater. There will also be a ribbon which looks like a Jubalife City Ribbon but is pink. Now let's begin shall we!

    Dawn was in the dressing room making herself look her best for the contest. It was her third contest and she wanted to win!
    " I think I will use Buizel this time besides Buizel never had a chance to be in a contest and we should show what we got! " said Dawn.
    Dawn was called out to the stage and she was more ready than ever.
    " Buizel Spotlight! " Dawn called out! " Buizel use Aqua Jet! "
    Buizel used the Aqua Jet and it was full of grace! It was ever so fast! It was one of the fastest moves the crowd had ever seen!
    " Buizel use Razor Wind! " Dawn called out!
    Buizel used Razor Wind and made a perfect ending.
    Dawn got a perfect score!
    When Dawn came back to the dressing room she found a girl about her age sitting on a chair right next to her dressing room.
    " Hi! " said Dawn. " My name is Dawn! "
    " Hi to you! " said the girl. " My name Vivian! "
    " I am Zoe's cousin and I am entering the contest for Zoe cause she got sick! " said Vivian.
    " Wow! " said Dawn. " Vivian you better get on stage it is your turn! "
    Vivian left and was right on stage.
    " Growlithe Curtain! " Vivian called out! " Growlithe use Fire Spin! "
    Growlithe used the Fire Spin and went through it!
    " Now use Flamethrower! " Vivian called!
    Growlithe spun around and around while using Flamethrower!
    A very strong score for rookie!
    Many other trainers tried to get a perfect score but they never watched what their pokemon was doing. Poor Pokemon!
    The judges are now making their choices of who will go to round two.
    Who will keep their dreams alive?
    Find out what happens next time in Part 2!
    Last edited by Ninetails 009; 08-24-2007 at 12:12 PM.

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    That was just simply wonderful!

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    Default good job

    its very good i'm new here and i hope you continue the story.

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    Post The Contest Part 2

    Soon the results came in and it was time for the moment of truth. The screen came out and showed the coordinaters who will go to the next round.
    " Alright I made it! " exclaimed Dawn.
    " I made it! I am going to win no matter what. " said Vivian.
    Now it was time to mix the coordinaters in the battle round. Dawn ended up with a boy name Jake. Jake was talented but was a little harsh with pokemon Dawn heard. Vivian was put with the sassy girl,Kaimalu.
    Now it was time to battle!
    " Piplup Spotlight! " exclaimed Dawn.
    Bubbles appeared everywhere and Piplup spun around the bubbles.
    " I choose Turtwig! " exclaimed Jake.
    Leaves of all kind appeared with Turtwig in the middle.
    " Piplup use Ice Beam! " Dawn said.
    Piplup jumped up shot an Ice Beam straight on the ground. It made it slippery to stand on the floor and so Turtwig fell which made Jake lose points.
    " Turtwig start using Razor Leaf and then use Bite! " said Jake.
    Turtwig tried to cut a hole in the ice but it bounced back hurting Turtwig and making Jake lose points. Then Turtwig used Bite but hurt it self again.
    " Piplup use Whirlpool and swim through it using Drill Peck. " said Dawn.
    Piplup made a magnificent performance with Whirlpool. Then when it swam through the Whirlpool using Drill Peck making it quick and hurt Turtwig to make Jake lose almost all his points.
    " Turtwig do a Solarbeam! " said Jake.
    Turtwig was to weak to make even one little spark. Poor Turtwig was getting shouted over and over again. Finally Turtwig dropped with no more power left.
    There was still twenty minutes left but since Turtwig fainted Dawn won this round.
    " This a dumb Turtwig. I do not even know why I caught it. " Jake said.
    " You do not deserve a pokemon at all! You treat them any way you want you are the dumb one. That Turtwig does not belong to you at all. "
    " Piplup show him the true meaning of having a pokemon. " Dawn said.
    Piplup used Hydro Pump and sent him far away. Dawn decided to give the Turtwig to Vivian which she said yes.
    Vivian won against Kaimalu and now it was time for them to see who will become the winner of this contest.
    Who will win?
    Find out next time on Part 3!
    P.S. Part 3 will be the last part of the story.
    Last edited by Skylynne; 08-23-2007 at 11:35 PM.

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    They walk on to the batlle field and go up to eachother. They try to figure out what to say then Dawn speaks.
    " I hope you have good luck with the battle. " said Dawn.
    " You better just watch out because I am gonna win. " said Vivian.
    They shook hands and walked to eachothers side. Soon it was time to start the battle and the trainer were still trying to figure out which pokemon to choose.
    The battle began!
    " Ninetales Curtain! " exclaimed Vivian.
    A blast of fire burst out from the ball and spun around. Then Ninetales did a backflip and landed on all fours.
    " Buneary Spotlight! " exclaimed Dawn.
    The Buneary appeared out with the pedals from the flowers.
    " Ninetales use Ember. Then I want you to use Swift. " said Vivian.
    Ninetales jumped up and then Ninetails used Ember. Then used the Swift to form fire stars. It was coming pretty fast.
    " Time to use Dizzy Punch and then use Ice Beam. " said Dawn.
    Buneary used Dizzy Punch straight down on the back and then used Ice Beam on the ground which made Ninetales fall over and made Vivian lose points instead of Dawn.
    " I want you to use Fire Spin and then use Flame Wheel. " said Vivan.
    Ninetails used the Fire Spin and then used the Flame Wheel as it went through the Fire Spin to give extra force and style.
    " Ice Beam the parts that have been burned the bounce top of Ninetales with Bounce. " said Dawn.
    Buneary used Ice Beam to freeze the floor and part of Ninetales. Then it bounced on the part that was not frozen from Ninetales.
    " Flamethrower!!!!!! " exclaimed Vivian.
    " Ice Beam !!!!!!!!! " exclaimed Dawn.
    When the Ice Beam and Flamethrower was plunged in together made an amazing but dangerous force until there was the explosion!
    Everything was very dark. When the smoke cleared the audience clapped for Buneary as Buneary was still standing.
    The video cameras showed that while the smoke covered the place Buneary bounced out of the way and Ice Beam it's back instead.
    Dawn was very proud to earn her ribbon and was very happy with her pokemon for working so hard. Vivian went to go congragulate Dawn and hoped that next time she went to a pokemon contest that she got to see Dawn again for a rematch. Dawn hoped she would be stronger to make it more challenging.
    They shook hands and left through the doors. They walked in different directions hoping that someday they will become a top coordinaters and see each other again in the future.
    The End
    Next story will be here very soon.
    P.S. The story will be with real people and I will be in it.
    Last edited by Skylynne; 08-23-2007 at 11:40 PM.

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    sweeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeet! I know I don't know you but I put you on my buddy list cause you are the only one who said good things about my story. So thanks. See the next story called pichu problem part 1.

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    thanks

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    thanks

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    hope you like it

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    make sure to read Piplup Vs. Chimchar Chapter 1

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    Hey retard, no need to fill up the Fan Fiction boards with a new thread for every incredibly sub-par chapter of your "story", if it can be called that.

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    I'll go around locking all the bad threads after a week. It'll be fun. And long awaited.

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    *Just to say I've helped Skylynne merge the 3 chapters into 1 thread so it'll be neater.

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    Thank God for N009

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    i love you ninetails <3

    haha, reminds me of my wifey kelshi!

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    Quote Originally Posted by Annabelle View Post
    That was just simply wonderful!
    please tell me you dont make alt accounts to boost your ridiculous self-esteem

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    Ninetails009 thanks

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    Quote Originally Posted by SuikunMyuu View Post
    i love you ninetails <3

    haha, reminds me of my wifey kelshi!
    Of course!

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