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Thread: Jirachi Or Deoxys?

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    Selina912
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    Default Jirachi Or Deoxys?

    Here's the poem me and my friend suggested:

    Hey, i've caught a Jirachi!
    What have you caught?
    Oh, you caught a Deoxys!
    Lets have a battle!

    Jirachi or Deoxys?

    Hey you, Jirachi!
    Hey you, Deoxys!
    Friends forever!!!

    Jirachi or Deoxys?
    It's your choice!

    Jirachi, forever.

    Deoxys, forever.
    Last edited by Selina912; 09-22-2007 at 12:17 PM.

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    I love Skitty
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    cool 5/5
    may is the best!



    better then the rest




    I think shes the rules


    don't u forget it

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    Quote Originally Posted by prettyskitty View Post
    cool 5/5
    No offense, but I think that Misty is better than May. She would sooo beat her in a battle.

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    No one cares. This board is for discussing SONGS and POEMS. If you want to argue about whether May or Misty is better, take it to another board.

    Anyway, great poem, Selina!

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    Quote Originally Posted by prettyskitty View Post
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    Do not revive old threads.

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    Thanks!

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    When earth stops, breath stops. LOL.

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    10/10

    would read again

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    I'm not great at understanding poetry, but I don't see a lot of time put into it. 4/5
    We could all take a lesson from crayons:

    Some are sharp

    Some are beautiful

    And all are different colors

    But they learn to live in the same box

    You know where this is going;)

    Noelle pairs with no one:P

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    Itty Bitty Kitty of DOOM. Peeki's Avatar
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    Very simplistic poem. I don't mind simple, but that is too fundamental and basic.

    The words used aren't invoking, or interesting. I don't like your word usage.

    1/5

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