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    Default ultamat desntiny: nintales 009 advetiures

    it wsa a butiful morning in palet twon an teh sun was jus risinsg. ther was tis girl in bed who was jus wakfing up an she jumpd up a yelld 'omfg wot time iz it? o shit im late' she got up an put on hre cloths ann hurry to teh door thing an ran dwonstars her mommy was tere 'good lucjk ninteals 009 hoeny' she sed an nintales 009 was like 'lol w/e' am ran out twoards profesa okas place ninetlaes 009 got teh plofesa oaks an tons of ppl were ther liek balck dudes who were lik yo nigger u be about ta start on ur pokmon joiurney bitch an ninetaels 009 was like lol an gary was tere aswel he was very handseme but not in a gay way. he was like bitch u late i gots a pokemon an u dunt an nintetaels 009 was like tanks for saving it for me and snatchd teh pokebal from gartys hand gary was liek wtf but nintetales 009 just walkd up to teh professas lab place. profusa oak ran inta ninatels 009 at teh door an was like lol i was jus comin teh see u an ninetales 009 was liek kay an profesor oak sed i goit ur pokemon in teh pokenall for u all teh others wer taken but ninetales was liek i alredy got mine from gary an profesa oka was like o okay. n inetales then got her pokedrex thing an pokebals an set out from palet to becum a pokemon master

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    This is a grammar nightmare

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    It's intentional, I wanted to be different.
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    Pikatwo, this is a really bad attempt at mocking this sub-forum, but it's not that bad an idea. Still, don't make your own thread for it.
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    Thanks for the constructive criticism so far guys, I appreciate it.

    EF, who said that I'm mocking this sub-forum?
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    Because you're certainly not trying to write a decent fanfic.
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    Chapter two coming soon.
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    Expect even more chatspeak and even less correct grammar!
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    haha I find this funny. You know Pikatwo, you're not to far off the average here in this sub-forum.





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    ninetales 009 walk dow teh steet n saw a bidoof. OMG A BIDOOF I WANNA CATH A BIDOF YAY ninetales 009 thew pokeball it open POOF. ninetales 009 tok teh bidoof n walk n met gary gary want 2 figt n ninetales send ut her bidoof! gary threw ball n turtwig came out. use raxor leef gary yell n turtwig use raxor leef bidoof got hit. no bidoof ninetales 009 got angry n hit gary. owww owww gary fight bck n soon profesar oasks waled n saw tem hit eah otter. ninetals 009 like punched okas n okas kick gary n soon teh 3 was al agry.

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    Excellent follow up Ninetails!! This is better than most of the stories here! xP

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    This is pretty amusing

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    Sometimes, mockery can be helpful... this, unfortunately is true.





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    CHAPER TWO

    noinetales 009 was walking along teh road with a rope tired 2 her new pokmon cuz itr wudnt stay in itz pokerbal for sum reason it was a piakchu but it was a speshel pikacha becuz it cud talk liek a real person like in english! afta walking for sevral hour pikachu ask ninetlase 009 to let it go 2 teh bathroom an nietale 009 was liek okay soi pijkachu went into teh bushes an took a dump for liek 2 hours or sumthing ninetalse 009 was very upset tat itt was taking so long : (

    2 HOURS LATER

    Nintales 009 and pkchachu contindeud on there quest teh becum poklemon masters well Nnietales 009 unyway an soonm they came across a pidgy in teh grass!!!! there was dia,logue

    NINTETALES 009: OMG a pidget poikdex wtf is this thing
    PODEDEX: piudgey a bird pokemon
    NINTASLES 009: wot elsse
    POKEDREX: Dunno tbh
    NINETALES 009: O okay
    NNETALS 009: Hallo thar pidgheyt wil u be mny friend?
    PDIDGEY: lol no *shits on Nintales 009s shoe*
    NITAELS 009: Ew i wil forgeve u for taht cuz u r teh chosen one that i saw in my drems liek al teh time
    PIDHGEY: Dunt care
    NINETLAES 009: wtf why not its liek totaly awsum : D
    POIDGEY: I dunt want 2 be teh chosen one cuz keanu reevees dies at teh end
    NINETALES 009: OIC wel then i heav no choice but to hav piakachu kill u now
    PIDHEY: O no
    NINTELA 009: Actualy cant be assd tbh so bai
    PIDEGEY: o ok bai then

    Nintetales 009 turned away from teh pidhey an saw taht pikachu was under attack buy a spearow!! : O yo nigger this spearow is trippin pikachu yelled arrggh pikachu fell from teh tree an was liek all brusied an stuff an hurt o no ninteales 009 cried go away spearow teh spearow dint liek being told to go away so it yelld motherfuckas over here an suddnly tons like hundreds of spearwos apperd!! o shit ninetleas 009 yelld

    WHAT WIL HAPEPEN NEXT@3+?! STAY TUNED FOR PART 3!!!
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    Quote Originally Posted by The Lacemaker View Post
    If you want to ask Yvonne out, just ask her.
    Why must boys always try to be so indirect?

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    This is hilarious.
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    Chapter 3 coming tomorrow, was too busy today.
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    of course, such grandiosity must take time to create!

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    cun i b da gest star

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    this is a nightmare... am i dreaming. well let's start. this whole entire story sucks like crap, no originality and let's say your spelling is like that of a foreign student from iran or something. you should just stop writing this fanfic...
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    Are you capable of computing what a joke is?

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    Pikatwo you have to keep character.

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    You're TOTALLY taking me out of the story.

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