This might fit better in the FanFic or RP sections, but it seems to fit here too so....

I haven't read any detailed description of a pokemon, evolving. There's probably some good ones in the Fan Fic forum but I haven't look too closely there yet. I just did one in the Legacies of a Pokemon Dream RP Forum. In the War in the Pokemon world thread.. on about page 3. I was wondering what everyone else thought? If the actual evolution part (not the ritual really) seems to physically describe evolution in an accurate and interesting way?