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    Default The Eevee of dreams

    There was a long lost scroll in an ancient pokemon forest. Unfortunately two humans found it. It said "A pokemon, greater than dreams will be born. An Eevee with powers to crush worlds. This Eevee will appear normal, but to find her simply provoke her to use her powers. Then hurt a loved one of hers and she will turn gold. And only until she gets revenge will she return back to normal."

    I'm going to the rest bit by bit
    Skye the Leafeon has came back reinforced!

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    Ugh, this is atrocious. Please just stop making threads. I'm getting really sick of your crap.

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    ...........................im, only 10..................
    Skye the Leafeon has came back reinforced!

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    I don't want to keep hearing your age. This bullshit needs to stop, no matter how old you are. If you're "only 10", then you should wait until you get older, or actually go to fucking school, to make threads. We don't lower standards because you're younger, we expect you to rise to the challenge. Now, if you're going to pull this crap again, I'm going to ban you.

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    Quote Originally Posted by EeveeandPichu=UmbreonandPikachu View Post
    ...........................im, only 10..................

    You're kinda insulting me. I'm ten too. -__-
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    Quote Originally Posted by EeveeandPichu=UmbreonandPikachu View Post
    ...........................im, only 10..................
    Hahahahaha! Now that's the worst excuse ever. Practice spelling, and if you can't do something, GIVE IT UP.

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    Already, it could be better.
    '......................................im, only 10...................'
    You could at least say:
    '...I'm only 10...'
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    Quote Originally Posted by EeveeandPichu=UmbreonandPikachu View Post
    There was a long lost scroll in an ancient pokemon forest. Unfortunately two humans found it. It said "A pokemon, greater than dreams will be born. An Eevee with powers to crush worlds. This Eevee will appear normal, but to find her simply provoke her to use her powers. Then hurt a loved one of hers and she will turn gold. And only until she gets revenge will she return back to normal."

    I'm going to the rest bit by bit
    And this is not a story, never will be one. Maybe an intro, but not even worth for one. Your writing style is horrible. Practice it using word, or write it on paper and show it to a teacher to rate it, then it's worth posting on PD.

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    Who knows how long that'll take though.
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    It's worth the time if a good story is coming out. A story takes more than just ten minutes to be written.

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    Sorry, but this is a major flop. Just read the damn fan fic tutorial to not make a fool of yourself. Jeez.
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    I don't know which one is more insulting; you destroying the English language through this thread, or Lord stealing my fan fiction.

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    Destroying English is worse.
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    This fan fiction burns my eyes.

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    Half of the stuff in this board burns my eyes.

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    At least latias4000 stopped writing fics.
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    This person's poems rip out my internal organs, as well.

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    At least your skeleton's okay.
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    It won't be for long. . .common sense tells me that things here are just going to get worse and worse. . .

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    A ban should take affect now.

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    Why?

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    1) Having an incredibly long and irritating name
    2) Being unable to use correct grammar and spelling
    3) Being overall illiterate and n00bish
    4) She probably will keep being illiterate and n00bish

    Must I go on?

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    No, or else the list is going to go down to 1000).
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    That is a LONG name... Eeveeandpichu=Umbreonandpikachu...
    Just saying, if your insulted...
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    Fine then, if you hate my work don't bother to look at it. You know, I came to this website with some hope that people would praise me with the slightest good bit and tell me how I should change it. I'm not asking my teacher to review it because in my class people think pokemon is a joke! I'm just asking if you could help me with my changes, that is not too much to ask for, is it?

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