The Eevee of dreams

[Ninetails 009]

A choice between locking and being here...?

[Omnipotent Chaos]

Let's have a poll, all in favor of her name being changed to something short and degrading, say yay, all in favor of just banning her for n00bishness, say nay.

[The Editor]

Toast this.

[Eon Spirit]

Yay. Oh long name person, just because you're ten doesn't mean your grammar should suck more than my brothers soccer skills in an inverse world. When I was ten, yes five long years ago, I didn't suck, I had good grades in English, and I wrote a freaking two sided essay, still hate it, that had no spelling, or grammar errors. And don't use any racial excuse, because that's racist. Understood. Good. I'll go back to Happy grammar days now.

~ES~

[The Editor]

*sighs* I miss the days when grammar was respected, even though they were before my time...

[Stardust]

Just because you're ten doesn't mean nothing. When I was ten, I knew about the usage of MS Word. You should use it too.

[The Editor]

Okay everybody, I think s/he has got the point by now. Pichubro, would you be so kind as to close this thread?

[Omnipotent Chaos]

*sighs* I miss the days when grammar was respected, even though they were before my time...

I do to. Nowadays it's thrown down and pulled through the mud like a useless whore.

[The Editor]

It's "too", not "to".

Do you ever use semicolons?

[the master]

Toast this.

Ed, why the hell do you keep saying "toast"?

[Qoorl]

Actually it's not terrible. It just needs a good deal of editing, and a lot more development. I teach, and believe me I've seen High Schoolers who do worse. Heck I have 6th graders who can't read or write more than a few words. THen again they aren't on an elite pokemon forum either but still... a bit of constructive criticism couldn't hurt the kid.

[Omnipotent Chaos]

It's "too", not "to".

Do you ever use semicolons?

No, I've never understood their point.

[the master]

Actually it's not terrible. It just needs a good deal of editing, and a lot more development. I teach, and believe me I've seen High Schoolers who do worse. Heck I have 6th graders who can't read or write more than a few words. THen again they aren't on an elite pokemon forum either but still... a bit of constructive criticism couldn't hurt the kid.

Same for my classmates. It's pure horror to read their essays..

[Omnipotent Chaos]

I hate essays. *glares at writing projects*

[the master]

Hail the inventor of PCs. Now I can just print something in 5 mins what I need 2 hours to write.

[Omnipotent Chaos]

Hail the inventor of PCs.

Wasn't that bill gates?

[the master]

...I have no idea. That's what Google is for.

[The Editor]

I keep saying toast because of the ever popular "We're toast, aren't we?" I like refering to dead things as being "rendered unto toast", particularly in games.

The semicolon is used to join two related sentences together, and also in lists where commas are serving other purposes. Examples:
I like toast; I like muffins too.
So, we'll need monkeys, hopefully starving; a lemon; an anvil, preferably iron; and some dynamite.

[Silver Espeon]

Okay, so we've had cookies in Oni Raichu's thread...what're we gonna have now? ...toast?

[The Editor]

Let's have muffins! Ooh, I should get some extra ones and a flamethrower... (you had to be there. Ah, The Muffin Man... May you smoulder forever more)

[Omnipotent Chaos]

Something tells me that it wasn't a pretty picture.

[The Quiet One]

Actually it's not terrible. It just needs a good deal of editing, and a lot more development. I teach, and believe me I've seen High Schoolers who do worse. Heck I have 6th graders who can't read or write more than a few words. THen again they aren't on an elite pokemon forum either but still... a bit of constructive criticism couldn't hurt the kid.

I guess you're right...

Okay, I'll review it and correct it properly when God sets it so that people can read my posts.

[Eon Spirit]

Muffins! I wants the biggest chocalate chip one!

[The Editor]

I'm going for blueberry ^_^

[crusherwakeman42]

Actually it's not terrible. It just needs a good deal of editing, and a lot more development. I teach, and believe me I've seen High Schoolers who do worse. Heck I have 6th graders who can't read or write more than a few words. THen again they aren't on an elite pokemon forum either but still... a bit of constructive criticism couldn't hurt the kid.

DITTO.