Pokemon tribes
Bloodstar stared across the dark river.
His deputy Blackflame (A Dark Charzard)
was landing a little off, he was about to land in the river!
Bloodstar jumped as he focused his aura into his dark colored feet,
he could walk on water,Bloodstar caught his deputy just in time
he skid across to his side. then...
Not the original,
but a copy,
a clone of the rival,
I need some Coffee,
In this life of survival,
my brother has died,
Even though my breath has sighed...
did i over do the drama
Not the original,
but a copy,
a clone of the rival,
I need some Coffee,
In this life of survival,
my brother has died,
Even though my breath has sighed...
3 things:
who is bloodstar?
why should i care?
why didn't you put any effort into writing this? i mean, there's not trying hard, and then there's this...
your welcome
oh come on pants lighten up
I mean look pokemon warits another one of these threads.
its wayy too short, it explains nothing, and i just dont personally like it. sorry kirb :p
your welcome
Love it! So much intricate details that are easy to miss, the symbolic nature of your work really talked to me. Can't wait for the thrilling conclusion to this epic yarn!
"The most beautiful thing we can experience is the mysterious. It is the source of all true art and all science. He to whom this emotion is a stranger, who can no longer pause to wonder and stand rapt in awe, is as good as dead: his eyes are closed." Albert Einstein
Who is Bloodstar and why does he have a deputy
Originally made by LM:
~ I have said nothing because there is nothing I can say that would describe how I feel as perfectly as you deserve it. -- Kyle Schmidt ~
~Silence is one of the hardest arguments to refute. -- Josh Billings ~
* dragon_berry**Fallen_Wings*
i have pic of bloodstar do you want me to post it?
Not the original,
but a copy,
a clone of the rival,
I need some Coffee,
In this life of survival,
my brother has died,
Even though my breath has sighed...
Not the original,
but a copy,
a clone of the rival,
I need some Coffee,
In this life of survival,
my brother has died,
Even though my breath has sighed...
fantastic picture
Then....
Bloodstar laid down his deputy onto the hard bed of gravel.
"You Lucarios always the same never doubted for a minute you wouldn't catch me."
Blackflame weakly whispered"they did this to me....the ocean tribe....this war must start...
...now."
Blackflame released his final breath and died.
As Bloodstar held his loyal deputy in his arms he cursed the ocean Tribe for their insolence against,the Bone tribe!
As this happened,at the ocean tribe our hero awoke....
Last edited by rival173; 01-03-2011 at 05:33 PM.
Not the original,
but a copy,
a clone of the rival,
I need some Coffee,
In this life of survival,
my brother has died,
Even though my breath has sighed...
:O
Not the original,
but a copy,
a clone of the rival,
I need some Coffee,
In this life of survival,
my brother has died,
Even though my breath has sighed...
to dramatic?
Not the original,
but a copy,
a clone of the rival,
I need some Coffee,
In this life of survival,
my brother has died,
Even though my breath has sighed...
no I want more ha ha ha ha ha
>:D
next installment tomarow
Not the original,
but a copy,
a clone of the rival,
I need some Coffee,
In this life of survival,
my brother has died,
Even though my breath has sighed...
Oh so Bloodstar isn't the hero
Originally made by LM:
~ I have said nothing because there is nothing I can say that would describe how I feel as perfectly as you deserve it. -- Kyle Schmidt ~
~Silence is one of the hardest arguments to refute. -- Josh Billings ~
* dragon_berry**Fallen_Wings*
no he is the villain
check my album for a pic of the hero
Not the original,
but a copy,
a clone of the rival,
I need some Coffee,
In this life of survival,
my brother has died,
Even though my breath has sighed...
Our hero awoke......
He yawned wide, revealing his neat row of 28 teeth.
As he was waking up a deep gruff voice yelled "Velvetpelt git' outa'der!"
Velvetpelt quickly looked into the pool of water by his bed.
All he saw was a shabby looking Eevee staring right back at him.
he sighed,was he never going to evolve into a Jolteon?
He slowly walked out of the small sea green tent.
A huge Primeape was staring at him "Your late!Whats Swirlspin gonna say!"
the Primeape bellowed.
Then admitting defeat Velvetpelt bowed his head and said "My humblest apologies
master Combatfist."
Just then a Poliwrath walked up and said"...........
Not the original,
but a copy,
a clone of the rival,
I need some Coffee,
In this life of survival,
my brother has died,
Even though my breath has sighed...
dramatic pause till later
Not the original,
but a copy,
a clone of the rival,
I need some Coffee,
In this life of survival,
my brother has died,
Even though my breath has sighed...
none today
Not the original,
but a copy,
a clone of the rival,
I need some Coffee,
In this life of survival,
my brother has died,
Even though my breath has sighed...
lol kirbx your a fun troll to toy with
your welcome
Just then a Poliwrath walked up and said
"Velvetpelt why is Combatfist yelling at you again."
"Lord Swirlspin sorry I just...just....was late.''
Velvetpelt murmured "You..you..can be late all you want now"
Swirlspin laughed "What!"both Combatfist and Velvetpelt yelled at once.
"Look at your self."wheezed Swirlspin.Velvetpelt raced back into his tent to his pool of water and exclaimed "I evolved into an...........
Last edited by rival173; 01-05-2011 at 06:37 AM.
Not the original,
but a copy,
a clone of the rival,
I need some Coffee,
In this life of survival,
my brother has died,
Even though my breath has sighed...
Even Skeletor has friends!Originally Posted by trixie
Not the original,
but a copy,
a clone of the rival,
I need some Coffee,
In this life of survival,
my brother has died,
Even though my breath has sighed...
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