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    I walk a lonely road that none will ever know
    I cross a barren wastland, no grass or water...it's all snow
    To me I have no friends, family or real home
    The path I walk is the only one I've ever known

    Trust me, it wasn't always like this, once I had a master
    We'd overcome every challenge, craving each disaster
    However, all things come to an end
    One jouney crossed the line, each lost a friend

    Murder, how I remember it so well
    Like the green waves on the ocean's swell
    Before my eyes was my master downed
    Weak and helpless, I ran and have never be found

    Now I look back and think that there's something I could have done
    It might not have needed strength or logic...it's love and friendship that makes us one
    The journey will not be easy that I can admit right now
    Guided by the morning sun by day and at night the calling owl

    It's a long hard road to walk by day
    But I'm on my way
    By night the path is hidden and hard to find
    But I'm one of a kind

    Master, I promise that I will keep livivng and fighting for you
    Even though you are gone, the setting sun and the ocean's blue
    Always remind me about the bond we had once, that will never break
    This is a vow that to you I make
    You will always be mine
    By night like a star you shine

    I love you and that is all I can say for now
    Thanks for being my greatest and closest pal..
    May I find what I am looking for soon
    Over hills, mountains and sand dunes
    I will search until I find the one thing that I have always loved.

    And that my master is you.
    Firestorm made me realize that if I quit and walk away, that's just lying down and making it easier to be pushed around....

    Now I'm back to finish the stories and poetry I started...thanks Jess!:happysad:

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    rolleyes

    The poem is so good. It touches the inner feelings.

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    That's very good. At first I thought it was a song. You did a really good job of telling the story. Excellent use of imagery.

    I give it an "A".
    Dibujo cuadros.

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    Quote Originally Posted by blackcatcurse View Post
    That's very good. At first I thought it was a song. You did a really good job of telling the story. Excellent use of imagery.

    I give it an "A".
    I'm sure she'd thank you if she was ever to come back...but she's not...but I gave my word I'd never stop trying...nice complement by the way blackcatcurse.

    Play with fire...expect to be burnt! Cause I fight fire with fire...but my flames overpower all!

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    Aww that's too bad. She was so good.

    I hate it when a good poet leaves their works.
    Dibujo cuadros.

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    Yeah it is...she did have some good work around the forums but took most of it when she left...I did manage to keep one from her about a Charizard...hope she comes back to start again.

    Play with fire...expect to be burnt! Cause I fight fire with fire...but my flames overpower all!

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    Please try.

    Also please look at my lyrics.
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    =^-^=
    These words are data
    But mean so much more
    Each poem has its meaning
    A moral lies in store
    Dibujo cuadros.

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    Nice poem blackcatcurse...very deep. Also your lyrics are very well written...great potential.

    G...I can take a hint very well...but what I don't understand is why you let these guys get to you because they kept mistaking you for another...that's got pushover written all over it.

    Play with fire...expect to be burnt! Cause I fight fire with fire...but my flames overpower all!

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    Everyone wants to be a Master
    Everybody want to show their skill.
    Everybody wants to get there faster,
    Make your way to the top of the hill

    I think that explains itself.
    Dibujo cuadros.

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    Thanks for the compliments...I'll get better in the future, that I can promise.
    Last edited by Pokemon Master; 06-30-2008 at 04:49 AM.
    Firestorm made me realize that if I quit and walk away, that's just lying down and making it easier to be pushed around....

    Now I'm back to finish the stories and poetry I started...thanks Jess!:happysad:

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