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    sad Live As One, Die As One

    I'm back!

    Oh Charizard you and me have always been one
    From the start and since our journey begun
    We have an everlasting love
    Pure and free like the white dove

    I remember the good old days
    Even the day that we went our separate ways
    You may have left me, that may be true
    But no matter what, I can never forget you

    You were there when I was all alone
    A friend that I could call my own
    If I ever needed you, there you would be
    Waiting for me

    But now alas, you are gone and I have no reason to keep living each night
    Ahh, the days we used to fight
    As a team, undefeatable
    We were unbeatable

    I treasure each moment in our past
    One day we'll have peace at last
    As I lay here on my bed looking out to sea
    I hope that wherever you are, that you still remember me

    The stars no longer seem so bright
    With the coming of the night
    At last I lay me down to rest
    As a team we always done our best
    I have finally found the missing piece
    Yet my heartbeat seems to cease

    Out there in the yonder blue
    Beyond any human view
    You are lying there, a faded red
    Legends we die...the living dead
    Spirits you and I roam the land
    Side by side and hand in hand

    At last we are together again
    Now our friendship can never end
    Even after death.

    Thanks to Firestorm for the encouragement.
    Last edited by Pokemon Master; 06-30-2008 at 05:50 AM.
    Firestorm made me realize that if I quit and walk away, that's just lying down and making it easier to be pushed around....

    Now I'm back to finish the stories and poetry I started...thanks Jess!:happysad:

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    awww, it made me cry

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    That's, so good, but, brings a tear to my eye, but i suppose that shows skill in a poem. Emotion.

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    yup, me 2, maybe bacause there easier

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    Very nice poem. Much better than I could ever do. It invoked very stong emotion. It sent chills down my spine for some reason.
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    That poem was so saddining.

    But great job!!

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    I'm backs :D Asher's Avatar
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    i prefer spriteing & drawing much more to writing

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    sounds good, i did a story quite a while ago, its called The World form a Lugias Veiw, it isnt very good either =/

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    ok, ive made a new one to called Abandoned

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    I, for one, laughed
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    well, thats obviously the typical Nanaki wich dosnt know anything hardly about emotional storywriting

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    Quote Originally Posted by Nanaki View Post
    I, for one, laughed
    haha. hehe. lol. lorl. lawl. larwl. LAUGH OUT LOUD.

    Nah don't worry Asher I'm not laughing at you.

    Great poem by the way P.M
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    *Credit to Anistasia for the Leafeon*

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    oh, you 4got one:
    MWAHAHAHAHAHA >=)

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    were laughing for no reason Pokémon Master

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    Quote Originally Posted by Asher View Post
    well, thats obviously the typical Nanaki wich dosnt know anything hardly about emotional storywriting
    Have you ever even looked at anything I've written? Whether it be in Misc. Writing, Fanfic or RP?
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    uuuuuhhhhhh, ummmmm.......no, and we were laughing fr no reason P.M

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